Sometimes young love
can truly last... but she won’t
take the risk, for the
times her heart was
broken is a long and
tiring list.
so long
since she
has loved
She's not
sure if she
can, silent
tears leak
down her cheeks
Why does no one
understand?
I especially like the title to this, "Rusty Heart" since it evokes the damaging/corrosive nature of rust, the saltiness of tears, and even the colour of blood. Well thought out.
ReplyDeleteThank you. (:
ReplyDeleteWow, your poems are beautiful by themselves, but molding them into artwork is even more stunning. Glad I stumbled upon your blog. (I was following a link from Lisa Vooght's blog.)
ReplyDeletei like this even though it is sad
ReplyDeleteWell sometimes love goes wrong. L:
ReplyDeleteoh wow this is so cool, well done and well expressed. in french, we call that a calligramme. is there an english term for it?
ReplyDeletethanks for visiting my blog, sorry i was absent for a little but now im fully back
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Thank you. (: I will have to look up the English term, and you're welcome! I loved it.
ReplyDeleteI like the mix between the shape of the question mark and the poem.
ReplyDeleteIt is what love brings to life when you think about it - a big ?
Lovely and Touching.
Thank you! That seems to be true. /:,
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