Sunday, April 10, 2011

Natures Tears (Su/M/20/11, revised)

watch
 beads of
 rain roll down
 the window pane,
they  look  like  glass
 pearls jutting out from  the
 cold  glass. After  a  while,  the 
droplets   turn  into  a   haze,  like 
clear  glue  sliding  down  the  surface.
 Outside, water courses through the empty 
streets. I breathe in the faint smell of ozone
 in a  heavy  rainfall. Taking   in   the  dark 
beauty;  seeing   the   deep   color   of
 the   cloud   filled   sky,  and   the 
grey,   cold    mist     that
 surrounds  me.

3 comments:

  1. really cool layout... i love poems like these.. but ive forgotten what theyre called ...

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  2. Very good. Very creative. I like it.

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  3. So far, this one's my favorite. :) Looking forward to more!

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