Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Little Pieces

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/        My            \
/     expression   is   impassable,     \
/       Near      impossible     to      read       ,\
/     My    words    are   infallible,  Despite   how      \
<   little  I   speak, My  mind   is  in  comparable, As it    > 
\    is  malfunctioning,    My heart    is     far    too   /
\      breakable,      Just   hanging       by    /
\        a    string.        /
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2 comments:

  1. The rhythm is very good, it really makes the poem alive. Well done, like it a lot.

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